A Dean's mistakes
In a recent essay in the Texas Bar Journal, Baylor Law School's Dean, Brad Toben, committed a writing error twice. Can you spot it? (The first text is a sentence fragment that appeared as a heading, so that's not the error, and that's why there's no period.)
- Burka's concern that the law's animation by larger societal and policy ends are largely ignored
- However, apart from the benefit of clinics and field placements providing real client experiences, another approach -- well-conceived simulations -- offer advantages that collectively can surpass clinics and field placements.
- law's animation . . . is [not are]
- another approach . . . offers [not offer]
Generally, keep the verb close to its subject. But on the many occasions when words legitimately intervene, be sure the verb agrees with its subject.
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