Friday, August 24, 2007

shall query

Some have a love affair with shall.

For example, they change this statement "A Service Award is credited to the account of a participating member" to "A Service Award shall be credited . . ."

Here's another example: "Eligible members earn Service Award points" becomes "Eligible members shall earn . . ."

Is this good drafting?

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